poems, practice, and process
by Hannah Stephenson
Fascinating where Climent's artwork took you. I like his paintings!
A quick, deft move from "healthy" horse to "Ruin." And of course "underbark" is close to "underbelly." Then the chilling last line. I wonder if "but" could be "and." I'm not sure it's important, but the idea is interesting--contrast or continuation?