tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post1394767994852838403..comments2024-03-29T05:15:20.833-04:00Comments on The Storialist: Underbark Hannah Stephensonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15792203070774504501noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-81364899104666858652013-08-21T18:12:38.895-04:002013-08-21T18:12:38.895-04:00A quick, deft move from "healthy" horse ...A quick, deft move from "healthy" horse to "Ruin." And of course "underbark" is close to "underbelly." Then the chilling last line. I wonder if "but" could be "and." I'm not sure it's important, but the idea is interesting--contrast or continuation?Banjo52https://www.blogger.com/profile/04342397136888422440noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-37830013525853736762013-08-20T11:13:54.474-04:002013-08-20T11:13:54.474-04:00Fascinating where Climent's artwork took you. ...Fascinating where Climent's artwork took you. I like his paintings!Maureenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.com