Magnificent, Hannah. So much unsayable said in so few sayings. The purpose of everything does keep spiraling away wonderfully doesn't it? All we know is we are re-born.
I thought the poem could a little loosening of the line breaks, to better savor and direct the flow.
Magnificent, Hannah. So much unsayable said in so few sayings. The purpose of everything does keep spiraling away wonderfully doesn't it? All we know is we are re-born.
ReplyDeleteI thought the poem could a little loosening of the line breaks, to better savor and direct the flow.
I just want to say THANK YOU for this suggestion! I originally had space between some of the lines, too, and kept messing with it...thanks much.
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