tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post8027549956499912649..comments2024-03-27T06:04:15.604-04:00Comments on The Storialist: Foe-wordHannah Stephensonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15792203070774504501noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-32794720343467359342011-03-10T15:56:02.126-05:002011-03-10T15:56:02.126-05:00Without even looking at the art (I haven't yet...Without even looking at the art (I haven't yet!), your poem speaks in ways paint can't, reaches deep, as in,<br /><br />"Grind it up,<br /><br />rinds of exit signs, greener than<br />the grass is now or ever<br />will be."<br /><br />I love your internal rhyme (forget the more proper term) of "grind" and "rind," and, as always, your telling soul.<br /><br />(PS: I attended a local poetry reading and open mic night earlier this week and shared a few poems, made me think of all my many blog poet friends, and I longed for one night for us all to gather and speak.)*https://www.blogger.com/profile/06484208765656281917noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-70048993707509669782011-03-10T15:55:41.302-05:002011-03-10T15:55:41.302-05:00as what susan said
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it's like reachi...as what susan said<br />and . . .<br /><br />it's like reaching<br />into a bag of misc.<br />up to your shoulder<br />i like it, the poem, that is. <br /><br />it is an exploration: <br />to hop into words <br />and feel around to see<br />what you can find.jack senderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08935449260703670377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-49977962603008444412011-03-10T15:07:41.628-05:002011-03-10T15:07:41.628-05:00Eeek. This one reminded me of a snake slithering a...Eeek. This one reminded me of a snake slithering along. The image is creepy too.Susan Tinerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11900811284963063686noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-50294083545324356062011-03-10T11:48:47.291-05:002011-03-10T11:48:47.291-05:00I need to read this over several times but when I ...I need to read this over several times but when I read forward in my head I heard an army sargent yell out FOE--Ward! Have a great day Hannah . xoMrsLittleJeanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08261467265044347736noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-57697206588206419392011-03-10T08:15:41.395-05:002011-03-10T08:15:41.395-05:00What I find interesting in the poem is the cadence...What I find interesting in the poem is the cadence, which seems to press down to keep from going forward. It may be because of the alliteration. I like the effect, the lengthening out.Maureenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.com