tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post6620331239256635181..comments2024-03-27T06:04:15.604-04:00Comments on The Storialist: Paper RouteHannah Stephensonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15792203070774504501noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-11067491039286227612011-08-09T15:28:31.502-04:002011-08-09T15:28:31.502-04:00Love this!Love this!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15826069692186367640noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-3147425085095882462011-08-03T14:08:22.443-04:002011-08-03T14:08:22.443-04:00I kind of like doing things on auto-pilot so my mi...I kind of like doing things on auto-pilot so my mind can range freely. Perfect multitasking.Susan Tinerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11900811284963063686noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-90434397572015801712011-08-02T11:17:29.646-04:002011-08-02T11:17:29.646-04:00I love the way the narrative and reflection on the...I love the way the narrative and reflection on the narrative lead so naturally into the closing image, expansive and evocative of darker depths, starker borders of experience.... A poem every day seems a grueling pace -- but you seem to manage it, somehow, without dullness or repeating yourself. Brava!James Owenshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07614935078978354375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-34940795926318625652011-08-02T10:02:51.313-04:002011-08-02T10:02:51.313-04:00"How old do we have to be/before we can compl..."How old do we have to be/before we can complete a task absentmindedly." Great question. I like very much how you've shown us one answer.Maureenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-40267752558855982112011-08-02T09:57:57.673-04:002011-08-02T09:57:57.673-04:00I know I am in trouble when I start doing things o...I know I am in trouble when I start doing things on auto-pilot.(not this one!) Palpably clear images. Liked it.ALBERT B. CASUGAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08403297362821170299noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-88344873449205672452011-08-02T06:46:12.672-04:002011-08-02T06:46:12.672-04:00A very vivid image illustrating what I believe has...A very vivid image illustrating what I believe has become a fundamental shift in society away from a focussed to a more abstract attention - if it is even that.<br />Your poem ripples out from the particular to something, alas, much broader.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-78367220121278254142011-08-02T06:31:30.209-04:002011-08-02T06:31:30.209-04:00As someone who makes her living at least partly by...As someone who makes her living at least partly by walking delivery, this one spoke to me, and made me think. There are days when I love it, and then there are days when it is just a task to be gotten done with. When DOES that start? You made me recall the days of being told what to do, with the disliked foods and the going where one is told. Ick!Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.com