tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post5361757183305648526..comments2024-03-27T06:04:15.604-04:00Comments on The Storialist: Two Thousand AndHannah Stephensonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15792203070774504501noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-7335023806573094312011-06-29T02:46:35.101-04:002011-06-29T02:46:35.101-04:00Time stays -- it does, doesn't it. Loved this ...Time stays -- it does, doesn't it. Loved this poem, Hannah.*https://www.blogger.com/profile/06484208765656281917noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-39372648769707237792011-06-28T11:39:17.373-04:002011-06-28T11:39:17.373-04:00I love the entire poem...I frequently think of the...I love the entire poem...I frequently think of the time when numbers were not invented...didn't they draw sticks on the walls? Genius! : )MrsLittleJeanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08261467265044347736noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-45453399039630490872011-06-28T11:00:20.078-04:002011-06-28T11:00:20.078-04:00Another beautiful poem, Hannah. Dave King quotes t...Another beautiful poem, Hannah. Dave King quotes the same line I dearly wish I wrote. Bravo, Hannah!ALBERT B. CASUGAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08403297362821170299noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-48312445051945368892011-06-28T10:53:02.294-04:002011-06-28T10:53:02.294-04:00I love this poem Hannah.
What's really weird ...I love this poem Hannah.<br /><br />What's really weird is to think of all the time that occurred before we even had numbers to mark years!Susan Tinerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11900811284963063686noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-22740628087315002892011-06-28T08:22:13.096-04:002011-06-28T08:22:13.096-04:00I, too, especially admire the lines Dave cites, as...I, too, especially admire the lines Dave cites, as well as the last three. You've taken a fascinating if abstract concept and rendered it in images we understand. Thought-provoking.<br /><br />I also like the source of inspiration for your title.Maureenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-18766610258027975262011-06-28T07:19:11.752-04:002011-06-28T07:19:11.752-04:00From the beginning, years
have been love letters
t...From the beginning, years<br />have been love letters<br />to things that disappear<br />and remain. <br /><br />This is a beautiful thought, and for me the whole poem crystallized around it, though I can quite see that that may not be how you wrote the poem.<br /><br />Either way, it's a clever, original and beautiful poem.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-85630548639937724142011-06-28T06:30:48.210-04:002011-06-28T06:30:48.210-04:00What interests me about time is that refresh butto...What interests me about time is that refresh button earth inhabitants have occasionally pushed that clears all the weight -- at what point does the whole thing go on a diet?<br /><br />Your poem reminds me of some lines by David Antin: "light is heavy and falls / three hundred and sixty tons of light fall /from the sun on the earth every day."WAShttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10403669322174979974noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-18977508355045360322011-06-28T06:07:17.729-04:002011-06-28T06:07:17.729-04:00interesting. 'Time' is relative to our exi...interesting. 'Time' is relative to our existence. Sprecial words from a special person may be considered 'big stuff' left for future humans. <br /><br />Sharing your words with us is 'big stuff'.Marcoantonio Arellano (Nene)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10713672589582754484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-61550094931051174282011-06-28T05:59:02.728-04:002011-06-28T05:59:02.728-04:00I love the whole thing, but especially that ending...I love the whole thing, but especially that ending. It's pure Hannah.Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.com