tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post5289023575412080882..comments2024-03-29T10:03:42.946-04:00Comments on The Storialist: The Big RevealHannah Stephensonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15792203070774504501noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-64476928933855805472010-12-01T00:56:23.582-05:002010-12-01T00:56:23.582-05:00"What magical series of obstructions
prevents..."What magical series of obstructions<br />prevents you from seeing too soon.<br /><br />The scarf wrapped around your eyes.<br />The hands beneath the scarf.<br />Your eyes behind their lids."<br /><br />Hi Hannah, <br />This is another one of your wonderful poems, where the reader becomes what is happening in the poem. The series of questions works perfectly, followed by the proclamation, and the kind warnings. You capture the anticipation we didn't even know we had, and now, we want to see it, and experience that flood of knowledge. <br /><br />It's the "we" that at the same time, almost makes it feel unsettling, as if we are being manipulated; adding multi-layers to the poem's effect. Without the "we" the reader could personalize and internalize, anticipating an epiphany of their own making; but this "big reveal" is an external event.<br /><br />Once again, wow!Anniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12588164536314320479noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-82666584201985292612010-12-01T00:09:27.671-05:002010-12-01T00:09:27.671-05:00I am looking forward to that moment.;-)
xoxoI am looking forward to that moment.;-)<br />xoxoLa Belette Rougehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05686717070120116918noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-79779750622525507782010-11-30T18:35:33.243-05:002010-11-30T18:35:33.243-05:00What will I get to know? I can't wait.What will I get to know? I can't wait.Susan Tinerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11900811284963063686noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-24716347654626689202010-11-30T12:38:44.008-05:002010-11-30T12:38:44.008-05:00Excellent crystallization of a moment.Excellent crystallization of a moment.G.K. Asantehttp://seenmissing.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-14401609966459624052010-11-30T12:28:58.531-05:002010-11-30T12:28:58.531-05:00OMG, this is the best...I have been praying for th...OMG, this is the best...I have been praying for the big reveal the last few days...decisions, decisions, how can I see through my lids..tell me Hannah! xoxoMrsLittleJeanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08261467265044347736noreply@blogger.com