tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post3747889324109754263..comments2024-03-27T06:04:15.604-04:00Comments on The Storialist: Getting ReadyHannah Stephensonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15792203070774504501noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-72726411972273928162011-12-09T20:36:59.121-05:002011-12-09T20:36:59.121-05:00I like the subject--already think too much about i...I like the subject--already think too much about it, the repetitions. But again it's your ending that esp. wows me--i.e., chills me.Banjo52https://www.blogger.com/profile/04342397136888422440noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-13222378492104418762011-12-08T16:08:42.816-05:002011-12-08T16:08:42.816-05:00we flow through time, and the days flow through us...we flow through time, and the days flow through us ... at any given instant, we seem solid and defined -- but all that hair and fingernails (among other things) suggest that we are actually quite permeable -- the stuff of the world flows into us, and back out, our bodies are ever changing, we each are a wave through matter that picks up pieces here and there and rides them for a bit and leaves them behind, our only physical integrity being the signal, the energy that lifts the matter, not the matter itself ... a well done, thought-provoking poem, hannah ...James Owenshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07614935078978354375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-78703618741716557772011-12-08T12:14:20.383-05:002011-12-08T12:14:20.383-05:00I love this, and you had me thinking. My favorite...I love this, and you had me thinking. My favorite in addition to the hair thing is the bruisey eye... I take moments to get ready, my husband is so proud and can never complain that it takes his wife for ever to get ready...still...adding those moments up!!! Once I went away to a village and did not have a mirror...did not see myself in two weeks. Things change very quickly without mirrors. Happy Thursday Hannah!MrsLittleJeanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08261467265044347736noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-17064287946194072632011-12-08T11:20:25.272-05:002011-12-08T11:20:25.272-05:00I like that same line Maureen likes. Getting ready...I like that same line Maureen likes. Getting ready always seems like a colossal waste of time!Susan Tinerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11900811284963063686noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-81994918804483761542011-12-08T09:12:18.755-05:002011-12-08T09:12:18.755-05:00Love the line "When you do your hair, do / tr...Love the line "When you do your hair, do / translates one way / for you, another for me." <br /><br />Always thought-provoking.<br /><br />Interest artist.Maureenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.com