tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post231535118763789669..comments2024-03-29T01:31:31.174-04:00Comments on The Storialist: OutpostHannah Stephensonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15792203070774504501noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-45135106097478126832013-08-11T19:39:29.451-04:002013-08-11T19:39:29.451-04:00Great suggestions here, John! Thank you....Great suggestions here, John! Thank you....Hannah Stephensonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15792203070774504501noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-21283973097513698732013-08-08T16:41:48.499-04:002013-08-08T16:41:48.499-04:00The beginning's sort of a variation on "I...The beginning's sort of a variation on "If a tree falls in the forest . . . ." I like it. Nice final four lines, esp. the last one! What would you think of changing one section to "as I try to bring it home . . . "? Otherwise, it reads as if the Place is trying to bring itself home. But I love the sort of extended metaphor of the horse. I too have tried to ride and guide him. I bet we all have. Banjo52https://www.blogger.com/profile/04342397136888422440noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-63109418012577346912013-08-08T11:56:01.527-04:002013-08-08T11:56:01.527-04:00I was thinking today and yesterday and a few othe...I was thinking today and yesterday and a few other days how some places leave an incredible impression on my mind that even in my dreams I visit them and how I have lived long in some places and there is nothing...searching for a memory but nothing...how weird is that for some places..happy thursday Hannah!MrsLittleJeanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08261467265044347736noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-58602864243028526332013-08-08T11:19:37.736-04:002013-08-08T11:19:37.736-04:00Love the piece for Storm King, one of my favorite ...Love the piece for Storm King, one of my favorite places to see sculpture.<br /><br />Maureenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.com