tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post1359288065895909544..comments2024-03-29T05:15:20.833-04:00Comments on The Storialist: DisarmingHannah Stephensonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15792203070774504501noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-46360786527593640882012-06-30T15:16:26.978-04:002012-06-30T15:16:26.978-04:00Quite an image you have here! Beautifully written ...Quite an image you have here! Beautifully written :)Irehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02225452291299150178noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-71039891817556269962012-06-08T15:39:32.837-04:002012-06-08T15:39:32.837-04:00I love buses probably because I don't have to ...I love buses probably because I don't have to ride them all the time. Little worlds of crowded hope. Thank you for your incredible writing.Cupcake Murphyhttp://oddgoodtrue.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-35951715918716340962012-05-31T20:07:35.718-04:002012-05-31T20:07:35.718-04:00I love witnessing moments like that, when someone&...I love witnessing moments like that, when someone's earnestness threatens to shatter the jaded prism I use to view the world. heheh.Shawnte Orionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00900779630992399799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-18346859893253176462012-05-31T17:10:00.095-04:002012-05-31T17:10:00.095-04:00Thanks, everyone.
Bill, I didn't know what to...Thanks, everyone.<br /><br />Bill, I didn't know what to make of that moment, the boy and the baby and the girl he was trying to flirt with...it was so odd. He practically melted about the baby, and I didn't think it was for show....it was such an odd reaction for a boy of his age to be so....gushing and sweet to a baby.Hannah Stephensonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15792203070774504501noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-9665914580760927762012-05-31T11:53:55.968-04:002012-05-31T11:53:55.968-04:00You had me until a 12-year-old boy starting oohing...You had me until a 12-year-old boy starting oohing and aahing a baby.<br /><br />Why the hell not make our fantasies real by naming them?WAShttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10403669322174979974noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-32608950117923633642012-05-31T09:57:39.148-04:002012-05-31T09:57:39.148-04:00What a wonderful picture you have painted. And th...What a wonderful picture you have painted. And the whole interaction between the boy and the teenage girl -- the last word sums up her life, doesn't it. VERY well done.Oak Creek Ranchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02875705582058188289noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-54431065552006945242012-05-31T08:38:31.426-04:002012-05-31T08:38:31.426-04:00again!! you do it again))) the whole poem but th...again!! you do it again))) the whole poem but this line particularly, <br /><br /><i> I am playing the <br />violin in my kitchen</i><br /><br />(i think back to american thanksgiving and how arvo part was playing large music just in my kitchen while i played along with my big knife sharply against the board, dicing stubborn turnip. you play, too, every time you write a poem.)<br /><br />xo<br />erinerinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16636371927224076866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-9302093455699635742012-05-31T08:17:06.377-04:002012-05-31T08:17:06.377-04:00Oh, Hannah. I love this scene that you've wove...Oh, Hannah. I love this scene that you've woven. So full of color and light.Chrissyhttp://www.silverfinofhope.comnoreply@blogger.com