tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post5495610616304153229..comments2024-03-27T06:04:15.604-04:00Comments on The Storialist: Scientific MethodHannah Stephensonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15792203070774504501noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-55758049363667020432012-06-16T23:05:21.650-04:002012-06-16T23:05:21.650-04:00Tight structure was effective here. Great use of c...Tight structure was effective here. Great use of <i>cairn</i>.<br /><br />(My prior comment had a typo, hence the removal.)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-76952424051771167262012-06-16T23:02:25.546-04:002012-06-16T23:02:25.546-04:00This comment has been removed by the author.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-65360072560215371962012-06-15T21:33:14.943-04:002012-06-15T21:33:14.943-04:00I'm still trying to figure out how you related...I'm still trying to figure out how you related that image to this poem.<br /><br />We once had "termites under the floor, chewing steadily, calmly." It was quite a project getting rid of them and repairing the damage.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15711792521348799922noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-11012315034220849302012-06-14T18:44:31.139-04:002012-06-14T18:44:31.139-04:00Once again your endings . . . but his time "...Once again your endings . . . but his time "only" a chill, not a cannon shot (which I mean in the nicest way--not didactic cannon shots, but dull thuds or 2 x 4s upside the head). This one is not a kill shot, but it gets my attention. Not all houses are eternal; probably none of them are.Banjo52https://www.blogger.com/profile/04342397136888422440noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-63484440890791638752012-06-14T11:58:43.401-04:002012-06-14T11:58:43.401-04:00Cute, and only native Californians would be so non...Cute, and only native Californians would be so nonchalant about termites. I alway fear that one day our upper floor will land on our lower floor! Have a great Thursday. : )MrsLittleJeanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08261467265044347736noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-85088158850975600342012-06-14T10:25:45.082-04:002012-06-14T10:25:45.082-04:00So funny that the first inclination was to look up...So funny that the first inclination was to look up, and not in the place itself where the answer could be found. Another good addition to your thought-provoking perception v reality poems.Maureenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.com