tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post5347773748578722839..comments2024-03-29T01:31:31.174-04:00Comments on The Storialist: RemovedHannah Stephensonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15792203070774504501noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-61515860042758310492012-06-19T21:23:54.755-04:002012-06-19T21:23:54.755-04:00funny to say it, but this poem was so poetic... so...funny to say it, but this poem was so poetic... so many levels to feel, read, think about.... beautiful hannah!!!!!!!!!!Drorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11986753016828013524noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-4379903261259092282012-06-19T17:02:14.914-04:002012-06-19T17:02:14.914-04:00Hmmm...I too was think of getting blank back...sad...Hmmm...I too was think of getting blank back...sadly not possible...MrsLittleJeanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08261467265044347736noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-7184866300663432232012-06-19T16:52:52.174-04:002012-06-19T16:52:52.174-04:00Thank you for these comments, everyone.
John-Banj...Thank you for these comments, everyone.<br /><br />John-Banjo....I lingered over that "but" (funny as it may sound). I had other words there. I may end up doing what you suggested here....thanks for that note.Hannah Stephensonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15792203070774504501noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-9360471515127447122012-06-19T16:26:13.810-04:002012-06-19T16:26:13.810-04:00Or, you're only a virgin once? I like the ide...Or, you're only a virgin once? I like the idea of playing with presence, absence, and everything in between. Obvious as the idea of a "tipping point" is, it can still be fascinating. <br /><br />Is "but" the word you want in third line from end? I was hearing the poem leading up to something like: "new. It's not the same as before you drew." Otherwise, I'm with Maureen in liking best "We can't get blank back." Also, I like what the rhyme adds at the end.Banjo52https://www.blogger.com/profile/04342397136888422440noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-3045524218395886722012-06-19T14:04:50.995-04:002012-06-19T14:04:50.995-04:00I love this. But I don't erase anymore. I hav...I love this. But I don't erase anymore. I have discovered that I usually erase the wrong lines. Instead I have heaps and heaps of pages. <br /><br />Yeah, that means one big mess. Oh well.Nin Andrewshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12643167108589844026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-76009502511707638652012-06-19T13:07:11.040-04:002012-06-19T13:07:11.040-04:00Holy cow, those first two lines - I am floored, Ha...Holy cow, those first two lines - I am floored, Hannah.Chrissyhttp://www.silverfinofhope.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-29896100090778260412012-06-19T12:00:39.299-04:002012-06-19T12:00:39.299-04:00This one reminds me of messing around with the Pho...This one reminds me of messing around with the Photoshop eraser tool.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15711792521348799922noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-37267584829471955542012-06-19T10:13:05.310-04:002012-06-19T10:13:05.310-04:00Fascinating that the art inspired this poem.
&quo...Fascinating that the art inspired this poem.<br /><br />"We can't get / blank back,/...." I like all that this implies.Maureenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-84133000973833120562012-06-19T10:00:13.458-04:002012-06-19T10:00:13.458-04:00"Only the hand that erases can write the true..."Only the hand that erases can write the true thing." - Meister EckhartWAShttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10403669322174979974noreply@blogger.com