tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post2094302465014592488..comments2024-03-29T05:15:20.833-04:00Comments on The Storialist: TrailHannah Stephensonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15792203070774504501noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-28400254618456460412011-12-16T00:23:48.877-05:002011-12-16T00:23:48.877-05:00I love the ending, but this is my favorite line: &...I love the ending, but this is my favorite line: "A scar we give to the ground by pressing down<br />on it with our feet."Susan Tinerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11900811284963063686noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-47975057128028779562011-12-15T14:50:49.938-05:002011-12-15T14:50:49.938-05:00I love "a scar we give to the ground."I love "a scar we give to the ground."Kathleenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06559881249054540947noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-7809918779748748142011-12-15T11:58:40.201-05:002011-12-15T11:58:40.201-05:00I had to laugh because I frequently see trails on ...I had to laugh because I frequently see trails on well groomed lawns because people don't like the paved way that they have to take...I have found this to be very annoying and have suggested that we allow people to wonder about at random and then draw the trails afterwards...no one has listened to me yet! Lovely poem as always!MrsLittleJeanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08261467265044347736noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-75347808280626772142011-12-15T11:12:00.890-05:002011-12-15T11:12:00.890-05:00Great poem - I read so many metaphors between the...Great poem - I read so many metaphors between the lines that you've written. Dragging rubble around and leaving a wake of destruction behind us :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-89271023254408130522011-12-15T10:18:31.354-05:002011-12-15T10:18:31.354-05:00What a twist at the end! I'll leave it at that...What a twist at the end! I'll leave it at that, except to say that I too like the images and the overall implications of trails we make.Banjo52https://www.blogger.com/profile/04342397136888422440noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-69732372968919134712011-12-15T08:49:03.367-05:002011-12-15T08:49:03.367-05:00I did not expect those last two lines! Wonderful h...I did not expect those last two lines! Wonderful how you reached them.<br /><br />Your images here are strong; I especially like "a tail / of rattling dust and / debris/ plumage/ loud as the cans / strung up".Maureenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.com