tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post1985297762607907973..comments2024-03-29T10:03:42.946-04:00Comments on The Storialist: Infinity PoolHannah Stephensonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15792203070774504501noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-8850129531607581372013-03-02T00:21:00.957-05:002013-03-02T00:21:00.957-05:00The crayon line was great. Yes, double meaning in...The crayon line was great. Yes, double meaning intended.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-70306648326462006192013-02-27T13:57:12.157-05:002013-02-27T13:57:12.157-05:00Wonderful. It has no edges! We could swim the sky...Wonderful. It has no edges! We could swim the sky!Kathleenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06559881249054540947noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-58032664807662064192013-02-27T11:36:38.567-05:002013-02-27T11:36:38.567-05:00this is immense....I do sometimes feel that I am i...this is immense....I do sometimes feel that I am in that hamster cage, really not a good feeling and I frequently think of how people in the old days thought the world was flat with an edge...no infinity...MrsLittleJeanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08261467265044347736noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171487865623213768.post-49734405702455267932013-02-27T11:17:12.931-05:002013-02-27T11:17:12.931-05:00That opening couplet with its keyword "illusi...That opening couplet with its keyword "illusion" is conceptually provocative when joined with "infinity", our mind and ability to name what we think being the barriers.<br /><br />I like how you go from the visually expansive infinity so difficult to grasp to the tininess of the hamster cage (and how you relate the smallness of our experience to that of our much greater world). By that line I have in my head a picture of nesting dolls, each one getting smaller and smaller. <br /><br />What would you think of ending the poem at "without end"? Maureenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.com