Monday, April 25, 2011

Calling

Calling

How did you get here.
If you were to tell me,

where would you begin.
What new thing called

to you, installed wheels
under your shoes, gave

you a handlebar and told
you to hold on while it

towed you. What caused
you to drop the anchor

back there, or over here.
When you chose, did you

feel that you were the one
choosing, or was a voice

loudly commanding you.
Did your decision fall

from you, light as a dime
slipping from your wallet,

no sounds, no sensations,
no evidence that the world

requires any thing from us,
any one thing over another.

6 comments:

Kathleen said...

Love the questioning and the command in this! Makes me ask it all of myself. Love the ending (and the coincidence that I have a very different poem but that ends with similar one or the other kind of line!) The image scared me, but then I went back and read the poem again with it in mind, and, yeesh! All the more scared!

Maureen said...

A lot of depth in this! So thought-provoking. Use of the handlebar and anchor images is excellent. I, too, like the call-and-response format.

MrsLittleJeans said...

it's the voices in my head I think...now you have me thinking about this obsessively : ) Love your poems, and you know it. xoxo

Crafty Green Poet said...

I love the questioning tone to this too, makes the reader think

Susan Tiner said...

Interesting, I felt pulled along as I read this. Not choosing. Love those knights in the image, especially the ones on light beam posts.

Muser said...

Nice--I like the stanza-form and the rhythms, especially.