Calling
How did you get here.
If you were to tell me,
where would you begin.
What new thing called
to you, installed wheels
under your shoes, gave
you a handlebar and told
you to hold on while it
towed you. What caused
you to drop the anchor
back there, or over here.
When you chose, did you
feel that you were the one
choosing, or was a voice
loudly commanding you.
Did your decision fall
from you, light as a dime
slipping from your wallet,
no sounds, no sensations,
no evidence that the world
requires any thing from us,
any one thing over another.
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6 comments:
Love the questioning and the command in this! Makes me ask it all of myself. Love the ending (and the coincidence that I have a very different poem but that ends with similar one or the other kind of line!) The image scared me, but then I went back and read the poem again with it in mind, and, yeesh! All the more scared!
A lot of depth in this! So thought-provoking. Use of the handlebar and anchor images is excellent. I, too, like the call-and-response format.
it's the voices in my head I think...now you have me thinking about this obsessively : ) Love your poems, and you know it. xoxo
I love the questioning tone to this too, makes the reader think
Interesting, I felt pulled along as I read this. Not choosing. Love those knights in the image, especially the ones on light beam posts.
Nice--I like the stanza-form and the rhythms, especially.
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